I gave up writing "Clique". Her is part of my new story.
as Michelle walked down the hallway of birchmoore, she could feel boys staring at her. At the end of last year, a girl named Brianna had stolen Michelles place, but just like everything else in michelles life, she got what she wanted. But this year brianna was back, and ready for revenge. As Michelle stopped at her locker, she felt a tap on her shoulder. Michelle turned around, ready to snap. " What!" she said w/ boredom in her tone.The girl was brianna. She glowed innocently, but her outfit gave a different tone. A pink and black plaid mini skirt and black/pink etines (Ew!!!) showed she didn't want funny business. Brianna also sported a black tee w/ pink skulls. striped hand sleeves completed the look. " I just wanted to say-be prepared. this time i'm ready.i've got back-up and I know how to use it." brianna repiled evil dripping in her voice, a trick Michelle learned in-well she was born with it." whatev. you know im better than you and u just can't except it. all the tricks you have up your sleev, soo old. people have all ready tried to bring me down w/ them. And u, just like everyone else, will fail.i'll be sure of that." At that michelle turned around and walked away, long black hair trailing behind her. Once she got to her friends she stopped. "the bitch from the east coast has re-turned" Michelle stated. All of her posse giggled. The girls admired Michelles perfect outfit. Slochy navy knee shorts and a matching jacket matched perfectly w/ her ivory cami and ivory/navy blue espadrilles. The tight clothes complemented her curvy figure.As the girls were gossiping, Michelles boyfriend, alex, tapped her on the shoulder. Since ot was the first day of the school year, he would give her a present. The girls watched with excitment, wondering what this years present would be. Michelle opende the present a squealed. " Eh ma gawd! I love." She planted a smooch on his cheek and showed her friends what she got. It was a slolid gold locket, encrusted w/ diamods. In the inside was a love poem and a picture of him. Michelle sighed. Could life be any more perect?
Plz rate. no haters though, so dernier cri, if u are gonna hate my story as much as u hated alys, don't bother.
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Omg! I heart ur story. but if u ever publish it, dont use ehmagawd. Lisi harrison would be mad. hee hee.
I like it! It's kind of hard to understand though. BUt I like where you're going!
PS- to delete a blog you go to settings or something. Idk.
:)
thank u samantha, im glad u love my story.
go to settings, then 'basic' scroll all the way down, and then there is a button that says, "delete this blog"
thanks!
love.
-------------aly(:
Um you have a ton of grammatical errors. It's really hard to read the story because of that.
k, i'll try to fix them next time
nice storyy.♥
I love the story. I like the guidelines. Michelle is exactly like me!!!
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